Shiny

By: Beth Bracken (View Profile)

I come to this place

with loud voices and noises

and write

and shake out the loose garments

of old judgments

and hang them on the line

for all those who also hang theirs out

to see.

Last night

the voices and the noises stilled

if only those in my head

and I watched

as if an outsider or a newcomer

to this place

shifted my perception

with deliberate purpose.

 

My diary is silent.

Bored without the flowery analytics

of interpretive dance,

moving and shaping

my perspective

or your image

in my mind,

its empty pages lie in wait

and crowd with words

that do not speak

the volumes that my heart beats out

in time

to the cadent rhythm of your lyrical touch.

Each time I hear your voice

my breath spreads across my chest

my soul settles into my body

a little more

each note

that connects me

to that sound

that earthy, solid sound

That whole and round and bass-ic tone.

   

You do not complete me.

I know this theatre of broken promise land,

have broken enough of them

to know you

cannot fill the spaces I carve out

of my own existence.

 

But when I leave your side,

after you have reached inside that pain

and tenderly pressed against it

warming it with acknowledgement,

I can accept that Grace,

the Divine Love

which fills me as no other love can

the surface of my skin expands with desire

to touch and reflect

and Love everything I encounter:

the sarcastic barista at the cafe,

the shrieking child in the stroller

on the sidewalk,

the awkward teenager on the bicycle

careening toward me on the street,

the birds

the cars

the traffic lights...

as I make my way back to you

to share

this gift with you

as if it were somehow new

something I discovered

in the fifth pocket of my jeans

fresh out of the dryer.

 

An indelible Love

that somehow survived

the laundering of pain.

As though you hadn’t been there

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posted: 10.30.2007
Problematic Emo_kid
that was wicked good. you like to write poetry? i attempt to write. im not any good, but i absolutely loved yours. thanks for the pick-me-up. school is a drag (thats where i am right now)
posted: 10.28.2007
Jodi Freedman
Beth, You captured it, right there in your hands, with your words. What a treat to read. Thank you.
It feels good to write.

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