Shiny

By: Beth Bracken (View Profile)

all along

standing in this space

fishing coins out of your pockets

as you sort your way

to the bottom

of the basket

holding up tiny treasures

with a gleam in your eye

holding them out to share

with equal enthusiasm.

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posted: 10.30.2007
Problematic Emo_kid
that was wicked good. you like to write poetry? i attempt to write. im not any good, but i absolutely loved yours. thanks for the pick-me-up. school is a drag (thats where i am right now)
posted: 10.28.2007
Jodi Freedman
Beth, You captured it, right there in your hands, with your words. What a treat to read. Thank you.
It feels good to write.

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