Margot Tremont had an itch.
For the last few miles, it had tickled her ankle and right foot. She scrunched her bare toes on the gas pedal of her dusty old Cabriolet, so cute and trendy when she bought it in college, now running only; it seemed, on the blood, sweat, and tears of her mechanic back in New Castle, Delaware.
Way back in Delaware. How many states back was that, now? Margot tried to count, to distract herself from the urge to reach down and scratch. One for Delaware, where she’d spent her entire life, growing up in a quaint old historic town, then studying at the university nearby, begging her parents to let her room in the dorms to distinguish herself from the other townies, wanting to be an actress. She’d hung on the tales of the only actress she’d ever heard of from Delaware, the blond girl who’d played Ben Stiller’s wife-to-be in Meet the Parents, as she tried on Shakespeare and Sondheim in student theater, and dreamed of getting away.
Pennsylvania had been next, she remembered. Only a few short miles from where she’d grown up, and the place to which she and her theater friends had escaped to see real shows—in Philly—Broadway tours and such that would have no reason to stop in tiny Delaware. She’d passed through Paradise, and hoped the real thing was better than the dingy burb that it appeared to be by the light of the dashboard.
After PA, Margot detoured through Ohio to visit Helen, stopping for an uncomfortable meal as she watched her former college roommate juggle the demands of her one-year-old and the contractor who was helping with the renovations on her split-level colonial. Margot remembered late nights talking with Helen in the student center, both of them washed out under the glow of the fluorescents, as they planned to move to Hollywood and become famous. Hollywood had seemed very far from Columbus, Ohio—and so she got back on the road.
She tried using the toes of her left foot to scratch her right, but after a moment of bliss, the attempt just left her wanting more.
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wow , this story really got my imagination to soar.... i still dont know what it was that was hit by the car. but that may be your intention... is the picture of the butterfly a hint? I was amused by your comments about your thoughts while driving on that long trip. nostalgia is great, isnt it? I used to live in Vermont and had a 5-6 hour drive each time I returned to LI to see my family. I actually enjoyed the driving. It does make you think of things not normally thought of while we are so busy druing our normal busy day. i loved your story. I am a little saddened by the thought of a driver hitting a live thing, but such is life. I loved your empathy for it...i want more stories like yours. tks, regards, one solo trvlr
Thanks so much!
Ok, I think my heart just broke. Must go pick up the crumbled bits and start gluing. You're a great writer...any other publishing? check out my article, I'd be interested in your opinion-under DC "play" section-song for a vanilla cynic. Patricia
I really enjoyed reading this story. Is there a part 2?
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