My parents drove me to the mall; we all got out of the car. As we went into the mall, my dad went right into to Tool Store. I went into a shop of clothes that was owed by Koreans. My mom followed me in, as I looked at all the pretty clothes, my mom bought me some nice clothes there. Then my parents and I went to explore the other shops in the mall. I went back to the shop of the Koreans, I stayed in their shop most of the time because I loved their style of clothes. The boss of the shop, noticed I came in their shop a lot … so he gave me a coupon card, which on the back of the card, it had said I love you so much. I then smiled at the Korean guy who owed the shop, and then I continued browsing the clothes. When my mom and dad came and said it was time to go back home.
The next day, I awoke in a cabin … every corner was dark and cold, until I heard voices slowly come toward me. “So they got you too, huh?” One girl with a dull voice said. I heard some other girls chatting but I couldn’t tell what they were talking about. “Argh! I hate this camp, it’s so boring here.” I just want to go home!” I heard some of the girls whimpering. I then realized I was at some Torture Camp, I somehow recall, when I was at school, there were a ton of rumors about this place, but I never thought it was true. In the morning, I saw that there were five other girls in this cabin. The guards yelled to get out quickly. I followed the other girls; I didn’t see my parents anywhere though. We marched down this old looking street, as I looked around, I saw not a single house was nearby.
As we were marching, I wondered how I got here. I noticed that the guards kept yelling to march straight, but some boys and girls had feet walking problems. One girl had deformed feet, she kept wobbling when she marched. Some other guards took her and they decided to hang her. I felt awful for her, she even looked younger than me. I have deformed feet too, but my feet aren’t as bad as hers were. The guards didn’t mind me, because I was tilting my right foot straight out so it wouldn’t go to the right when I walked. As the guards told us all where we were, for the people who did not know. For every person, they were grouped with 6-12 other people per cabin. We went back to our cabin, being locked in. The girls were talking about some old man who tried to save them from last year to escape this Torture Camp, but he failed to help them. I saw that same old man from the mall; he was the old man they were talking about.
While we ate some of the mucky-tasting soup they gave us, then went outside. I saw some people riding horses and they were headed to the camp. When they came into view, I saw that they were skinny people starving. They were aloud to go back to their houses, if they owed a horse. One very skinny girl riding a very bony horse got off her weak horse and walked toward one of the guards. The guard was very ashamed to see her horse skinned in bones, they took her horse and put him into the stable where their horses were eating happily. Her horse was starving and ate and drank until it was full. The manager took the girl, named Samantha and hung her onto the rope until she had died. Some people cried when they saw that happen. We were all called to go back into the cabins. If we do something bad, then they will punish us and bring us to the horse-like creature called Seahpurus, that creature is for the punishment for people. They say, if you cry for mercy the Seahpurus will stop hurting you and will turn into the creature called, SierraDephuraus. It’s the most rarest creature that will heal your wounds and hunger that the Seahpurus had done to you for your punishment.
The old man came back and tried to help save us but one of the guards saw him and threw him out. Then when the food they made us smelled so horrible, but since we were so hungry we ate it. We were fine, but our skin turned a little dull color. The guards gave us horses to treat and to ride, but were not allowed to escape the came grounds … if someone does they explained, they will shoot you. My horse that I got was named Abby. A few months passed and I got in big trouble. I didn’t even know what I have done, but the guards insisted to take me to Seahpurus to get my punishment. I couldn’t take the hits anymore, I screamed for mercy so loud that the people had to plug their ears. Then! The famous rare SierraDephuraus changed into form and a soft, warm red color glowed from SierraDephuraus and before it could heal me, one of the lady who manages this creature called it back to the from of Seahpurus. The red glow slowly faded away, and I was hurt deeply and was called back into the cabin. I couldn’t believe what the evil lady had done! I could have been healed if she hadn’t done that. I couldn’t even move because of my wounds, the other girls didn’t talk to me because they were in shock to see the SierraDephuraus for the first time of the years they have been in the Torture Camp.
When I was healed enough to go outside, the old man took me into the mall that I went with my parents before all this had happened. When the guards couldn’t find me in the camp grounds, they went searching for me. I saw some of them in the mall, I ran when they saw me. Then, out of nowhere I flew! I don’t know how I got wings but when I landed to the ground, I became human again! But I decided to fly cause more guards had arrived at the mall, I flew into the bathroom and hid in the garbage. I saw my mom coming in the bathroom, she saw me too, but didn’t tell the guards and she hid behind the wall. My dad came in the bathroom and saw me in the garbage, then he yelled that he had found me. I was shocked, how could dad do that to me…?! The guards came running, I flew out and out through the other door to the kitchen room. They had spears and they started to throw hot pancakes at me to get me down. I couldn’t take it when a streaming hot pancake flew right in front of me and landed on my face, I screamed, as my face got burned. I landed slowly down and the guards took me back. I was riding in their car, and it started to hail, the hail was as big as my fingertips. I stuck out my head out of the window and felt the ice cool hail melt my burning face. “This will be the last time I will ride in the guards car..” I whispered to myself.
I saw my horse Abby chasing the car, then I rode Abby back to the camp. When I arrived…I knew i had to be hanged for my escaping. Two guards, named Dave and the other Ryan took me and my horse up to the hanging room. As they put a rope around my neck and Abby’s neck, I cried out, “No! Not Abby! She didn’t do anything! She’s just a horse, just hang me please!? Not Abby! NO! Please! Don’t hang Abby too!!! She didn’t do anythin—” I was then hanged and died, but they didn’t hang Abby, I thought they would but they only put her right next to me, so she could see I did a very bad thing to get hanged. The newspaper came out about this so called Torture Camp, and cops came and the guards went to jail. I and all the other people that got hanged or killed in this camp was in the newspaper too. The Korean guy at the mall that owed a shop, read the newspaper and cried when he read that I was hanged. My parents cried too. The End of my dream. (When I woke up in the morning of this dream, I had tears in my eyes.)